one day. I went to an amusement park. I go there by bike. I play mazes there 1. One day…
when 是什么时候的意思，要改为 went on the way. 句号后面要有空格。 live there, 后面没有空格。 it were be by train 改为 it was by plane.…
One day, I when to Hangzhou. I when there by train, saw a lot of nice scenery on the way.I…
one day 首字母要大写 came to Hangzhou 表示来了杭州，你应该写成去过杭州 alot of 应该是 a lot of it were be by plane 后面没有句号，were be…
one day, I came to Hangzhou. I came there by train, saw alot of nice scenery on the way. I…
老家是 old home，老房子是 old house.
Today, my dog was sent to the old house.
Today, my dog was sent to the old house. 这里要使用被动语态，被送去了老家。 我才不是它自己主动去的，所以不能说 go to 而且这里应该用过去式。
Today I go to hangzhou. I went there by train. I saw a lot of scenery. I lived there for…
自己修改：One day, my house floated into the air. I was scared. Suddenly my house became a spaceship. He took me…
My day is spent at school,Write many homework,but am very happy . 【修改为：I spent the day at school. There are…
我不喜欢作业，作业让我赶到劳累。I don’t like homework，I’m very tired. 【修改：homeworks make me exhausted.】 一写作业我就打瞌睡，不过还是得写作业。When I do homework I will doze off, but I…
四个次 – 四次 four times 翻译人 – 翻译 translator 不非常好 – 不太好 not very good
如果哪一天你见到了一个外星人，你敢去打招呼吗？