My day is spent at school,Write many homework,but am very happy .
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My day is spent at school,Write many homework,but am very happy .
【修改为：I spent the day at school. There are many homeworks to do, but I am very happy.】
spent 过去式，白天是过去了。
最后这句需要加上主语。
My day is spent at school,Write many homework,but am very happy .
【修改为：I spent the day at school. There are many homeworks to do, but I am very happy.】
spent 过去式，白天是过去了。
最后这句需要加上主语。