5 thoughts on “I’m going to Hangzhou 》I went to Hangzhou”

  1. Today I go to hangzhou. I went there by train. I saw a lot of scenery. I lived there for a long time. When I came back, Is by plane.
    修改: Today I came to Hangzhou. I came here by train, saw a lot of nice scenery on the way. 既然写went there, 还有saw,那就是已经去了杭州了,所以不能写go to,要写came to.
    I used to live there, for a long time.
    When I go back, it will be by plane. 既然已经到了杭州,那回长沙就是go back,回去,而不是came back,回来。
    这些时态我看不太懂,也不知道你是去了杭州还是没去。
    请修改一下,重新发一次。

    1. One day, I when to Hangzhou. I when there by train, saw a lot of nice scenery on the way.I used to live there,for along time. When I came back, it were be by plane.

      1. when 是什么时候的意思,要改为 went
        on the way. 句号后面要有空格。
        live there, 后面没有空格。
        it were be by train 改为 it was by plane.
        plane 句子最后要有句号。

  2. one day, I came to Hangzhou. I came there by train, saw alot of nice scenery on the way. I used to live there, for a long time. When I came back, it were be by plane

    1. one day 首字母要大写
      came to Hangzhou 表示来了杭州,你应该写成去过杭州
      alot of 应该是 a lot of
      it were be by plane 后面没有句号,were be 是两个重复的单词,一个意思,要去掉一个,另外 were 前面的主语必须是复数,既然it 是第三人称单数,后面只能接 was。

刚开始耐心点,别放弃,多练习,写作会变得越来越容易的。

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