one day. I went to an amusement park. I go there by bike. I play mazes there
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one day. I went to an amusement park. I go there by bike. I play mazes there
1. One day 首字母大写
2，day 后面应该是逗号。
3. I go there 应该改为过去式 I went there
4. I play 必须是过去式 I played
Revision by the bloger:
On saturday, I went to an amusement park. I went there by bike. There are chestnuts. So I went to play, my mother went to bick chestnuts
1. saturday 必须是大写 Saturday
2. chestnuts 是一种游戏吗？如果是，必须说明是一种游戏，否则别人很困惑。意思是旁边有板栗卖？那要改为 There was a vendor selling chestnuts. 这样意思才明白。
3. bick 错别字
one day. I went to an amusement park. I go there by bike. I play mazes there
1. One day 首字母大写
2，day 后面应该是逗号。
3. I go there 应该改为过去式 I went there
4. I play 必须是过去式 I played
Revision by the bloger:
On saturday, I went to an amusement park. I went there by bike. There are chestnuts. So I went to play, my mother went to bick chestnuts
1. saturday 必须是大写 Saturday
2. chestnuts 是一种游戏吗？如果是，必须说明是一种游戏，否则别人很困惑。意思是旁边有板栗卖？那要改为 There was a vendor selling chestnuts. 这样意思才明白。
3. bick 错别字