one day. I went to an amusement park. I go there by bike. I play mazes there 1. One day…
when 是什么时候的意思，要改为 went on the way. 句号后面要有空格。 live there, 后面没有空格。 it were be by train 改为 it was by plane.…
One day, I when to Hangzhou. I when there by train, saw a lot of nice scenery on the way.I…
one day 首字母要大写 came to Hangzhou 表示来了杭州，你应该写成去过杭州 alot of 应该是 a lot of it were be by plane 后面没有句号，were be…
one day, I came to Hangzhou. I came there by train, saw alot of nice scenery on the way. I…
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